This feels like a "multiplayer" on steroids. The quality of the writing is decent. Very simple plot that's super easy to follow, but sometimes way too simple. Parts like the mean preppy girls who hate specifically the thing the bullied friend like troupe and the "Woah you're really cool!" "Huh? uhh I guess I am haha" were to be expected. But it had fun moments like Top and Rab trying to buy the game with tokens were fun as well as top actually being able to do the shell thing was also pretty fun. There's just a weird feeling that Gessica is putting herself out there to be used again just because they were the first people to be nice to her, but considering how this is for a student film it makes sense to keep this stuff short and simple. With more time, more characterization could be worked in.
Presentation is very consistent and budgeted in an appealing in a way that would work well as an online web series for kids.
The sound levels/ microphone quality can be kind of funky, I can't put my finger on it, but sometimes it feels like the voices are competing with the bgm and certain voice takes don't match in quality to others. It wasn't extremely noticeable for the most part, but was there.
All in all this didn't feel like someone making a student film, but rather an animation pilot or an already running show so Good job!