Ozone's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bowser's Big Day]

Great animation Kev keep up the great work! Really liked the twist ending and the skin boiling was cool and creepy!
(tattoo was on the wrong arm ;) but it's still a cool nod )

[Marth is OP]

As a fan of smash I was hoping to see more meta game references like chain grabbing or really weird/big hit boxes for Marth, but just having Marth's long grab length seems alright. Also it would have been a nice touch to have added Fox and Captain Falcon already selected on the character select screen when Marth was chosen.

From what I've seen you do, you seem to be sticking to parodies and if it works for you keep at it.
I look forward to see what you do as you improve...

[Love (of Dogs) is Blind]

This was alright! The humor wasn't mindblowing but it made me smile, You need to work on the movement to get better. Instead of just doing fast cuts of movements, try animating in betweens and you will go further. (sadly this will take longer but the returns will be better)

[Sonic OVA | Re-animated Teaser]

Nice little teaser. The lettering in "SONIC" was off at the end and the spacing was kinda off as well

OfficialfABs responds:

Thanks, can't really tell with the letter spacing, honestly it uses a really weird font haha.

[garfeilf is on crack.JPEG]

drawing to well for garfeilf also why is this meme coming over right now?

[Weird Employees]

Oh hey! it's great to see theodd1sout make it to Newgrounds.

It's a good start, but I think you need to develop your own style. keep with it!

inkanimations responds:

alright thank you

[Booty of grocery]

This animation was jarring. Seriously.
Your voice work is superb besides the clearly pitched man and his son.
However, your animation and amazing audio isn't synced up which is what you were practicing. Certain scenes went by to quick and your animation was very choppy. Hopefully whatever animation software you get will be able to help with audio syncing.
The writing was interesting here and there but nothing really made me chuckle or laugh.

Honestly, the great voice work kept me watching the video. It made the viewing way less painful than it would have been if your audio quality was lower.

Keep at it!

[West Tree gag show ep 3]

I learned a sexy lesson today. Nice! Little in the way of animation, but nice drawings and art. Kinda blurry which could be due to the file type. The sound is good, but the volume spikes and is uneven at certain parts. All in all, well memed.

[Squid Sisters: FEMM POW!]

Great work. I wouldn't consider this an E for everyone kind of animation though. At most a mature rating at least a teen rating.

[Archfoe Change Episode 1]

Confusing, kinda nice, and it made me pause to think about breakfast. You should get some music to play in the background so it doesn't sound so empty. I like the voice acting. Your movement could use some work, but it's a great start.

(Also it feels kinda short for an episode)

TzarQuetzal responds:

Yeah, I've never actually animated before the pilot(which I might upload later), so it's been a huge learning curve, things like timing and keyframes have been a learning process, that's why it was so short (ended up shorter WAY than what I thought). Thank you so much for the criticism and I future episodes will be better, hopefully.